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See No Evil (2006)
IMDB rating: 4.90
Plot: A group of delinquents are sent to clean the Blackwell Hotel. Little do they know reclusive psychopath Jacob Goodnight (Jacobs) has holed away in the rotting hotel. When one of the teens is captured, those who remain — a group that includes the cop who put a bullet in Goodnight’s head four years ago — band together to survive against the brutal killer.
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See No Evil
Directors: Dark Gregory
Actors: Jacobs Glen,Pegler Luke,Pagan Michael J.,Vidler Steven,Horner Craig,Wilder Mikhael,Cotton Sam,Robinson Corey Parker,Action,Horror,Thriller,
can you help me fix my poem.?
here it is. also what could i title it?
Once upon a doom filled night,along that God forsaken road,
Aimlessly I walked. My shadow flickering in the streetlight’s eerie glow.
Beneath my feet the paving stones lay split asunder,
Echoing to a passing lorry’s roar and thunder,
That swiftly disappeared into the threatening dark.
Then, with rising horror clutching at my fearful heart,
I reached my journey’s end.
That hellish haunted house. What dread secrets did it hold?
And ere the night was through!
Then from the depths of Hell’s dark pit
A spectral owl perched on a branch,
And pierced my heart with soulless stare
That warned…No closer ,if you dare.
With gaping beak,it said to me,staring with it’s coal black eye,
"Leave now,leave now or you will die!"
I turned and fled,all reason gone,
With icy fingers clawing at my spine.
Return to that evil house and road accursed,I will refrain
If, with God’s help,my soul and sanity I might regain.
But in my mind I still hear that croaking voice and see that coal black eye
"Leave now,leave now or you will surely die!"
Running aimlessly, I found myself where I started
Lost in this small world where everything departed
The nocturnal creature shouting the same phrase
Alone in the same old haunted house he stays
I turned back and noticed the coal black eyes.
Blank, reflecting only the night sky.
Slowly, the door from the haunted house opened, but no one was there.
He dove towards the door with the wind blowing threw his feathered body.
Everything was over before I knew it, and from where I came, I returned.
Everything was normal and forgotten. Everything I knew went unturned.
I did only notice one small change, possessed eyes of an owl that was unnaturally strange.
Not only had they grown in me.
But they also had grown everyone around me.
I would call it: Marriage
shortagainstthebox2002 | Feb 08, 2010
Only you can know what to title it. It’s your poem. Just isolate it’s core meaning and then you’ll know what to call it.
huston dawes | Feb 08, 2010
get a damn life you piss poor excuse for a human
Ben Conner | Feb 08, 2010
Here’s some ideas:
Don’t use God; it’s off-putting, overused and a cliche. Just use, "along a dirty and forgotten road," I think it sounds original and sincere. If you use "a" instead of "that" it makes the road seem more desolate, while "that" road brings it closer, to a road you want the reader to use that they draw from their memory, but your road isn’t like that.
You could use words like "ere" but those are old words and most literates want to read modern words in use today, so maybe they can speed read better. I notice English teachers hate students using old words, too.
I would use "a souless stare." Poets sometimes write in a terse, convoluted way to keep a meter, but you don’t have one, so you can use "a."
You can call it "The Owl" or just "Owl"
Fender Bender | Feb 08, 2010
Understanding the darkness.
Great poem, well worth publishing.
tomlizard | Feb 08, 2010
