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February 2, 2010
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IMDB rating: 7.20 Plot: A young Bangladeshi woman, Nazneem, arrives in 1980s London, leaving behind her beloved sister and home, for an arranged marriage and a new life. Trapped within the four walls of her flat in East London, and in a loveless marriage with the middle aged Chanu, she fears her soul is quietly dying. Her sister Hasina, meanwhile, continues to live a carefree life back in Bangladesh, stumbling from one adventure to the next. Nazneen struggles to accept her lifestyle, and keeps her head down in spite of life’s blows, but she soon discovers that life cannot be avoided – and is forced to confront it the day that the hotheaded young Karim comes knocking at her door. |
Actors: Kaushik Satish,Simpson Christopher,Nayyar Harsh,Drama,
I have 3 paragraphs here… a question about descriptions?
Hi, so I know I have asked already but I only got 3 answers so I need lots more people to answer.
These 3 para’s I have here are from different parts of a book I am working on so they may not make sense to you. Anyway, are they descriptive enough to let you (the reader) imagine the scene clear in your head or do they need to be more descriptive?
Thanks
Shaz x
Luca walked up the lane. The brick red house sat in darkness, the only source of light coming from the street lamps positioned a few feet apart. Number three, was the second house on the right. He approached it with caution, even though he knew he was invisible to the human eye when his wings were out. He couldn
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