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IMDB rating: 6.90 Plot: A ski vacation turns horrific for a group of medical students, as they find themselves confronted by an unimaginable menace: Nazi zombies. |
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Actors: Gamst Orjan,Henriksen Stig Frode,Hoel Vegar,Laursen Jeppe,Sundquist Bjorn,Valdal Lasse,Action,Adventure,Comedy,Horror,
Your version of a story? (Not trying to steal ideas!) EASY 10 POINTS! (Also: what do you think of my writing?)?
Here’s a little deal/bargain: Whoever writes the most appealing version of a random plot line from my mind gets a quick 10 points. Sounds good? And just to prove that I am not stealing your ideas, I am including my version. Please don’t make them to long.
Oh, and if you want to, can you critique my version? Constructive Criticism only, please. No "OMG ITS SO GOOD!!!"(personally I don’t think so.) and no "That was awful, I’ve never seen something so bad in my life, etc." Just, I like these parts: … I don’t like these: … You have bad grammar here… etc.
Plot: A (girl/boy) at (14 or 18) is living with their adopted (mother/father). They are tight on money and the (king/government) is heavily taxing them. They (steal/get a job/kill someone) and solve the problem. Or do they (live/die) at the end?
past tense, please. And only one from each fill in the blank.
Sarah was a good girl. Her adopted father, Da, always told his friends how she helped him in every way possible. She would walk miles into town to fetch the healer if he was sick, and scavenged for food for dinner all day. They had very little food or income because Da was a carpenter, but he was very bad at it, and the rugs that Sarah made sold for very little. However, they got by through love and luck.
One day, after a very long war, a King took over their country. King Robert wasn’t a very nice person. He was greedy, and the royal coffers from the previous king, King Georgio, were nearly empty. So he decided to tax everyone in the land 100 bronze, silver, or gold pieces, depending on their wealth. Sarah and Da were among the poorer folk, and somehow needed to scrape up 100 bronze pieces.
"How are we ever going to get that much money?" Sarah asked, glancing over the fancy scroll that had been sent to them from the palace.
"I don’t know, sweetie." Da smiled bitterly, his lips pursed, and a thoughtful look came over his face.